Post by Taecyeon Ok on Apr 2, 2012 20:46:11 GMT -5
Hello Final 4!!!
We're one step closer before we crowned our Second All Stars Winner.
Before that, let's see your photo for the L'oreal Men Expert product for this cycle.
Betty: Your eyes definitely stand out, but your mouth is covering half your face. Though the focus is on the eyes, the rest of the face is equally important. The product is supposed to lessen puffiness and remove dark circles - We can see some dark circles under your eyes, but they are not prominent - Nevertheless, they are there.
Taecyeon: Beautiful eyes!!! I love the fact that your eyes color pop out in the photo. I'm not sure the significant of the hand on your mouth but overall I like the way you stand out in the photo.
David: You have an advantage this shoot just by having the eyes you have because they normally stand out, anyway. They're definitely still the focal point of the shoot for me. I noticed them before I noticed your hand over your mouth. Not sure how I feel about that last part, though. Not sure how commercial that would be. Had your hand not been over your mouth and you were able to just slightly touch up the slight darkness under the eyes, this picture would have been flawless. As it stands, it's still a good picture.
Betty: Your eyes are beautiful and green, and they totally stand out here. You look fresh and young. It works almost perfectly as an advertisement for L'Oréal Men Expert, as well as the product. The product hides those dark rings under the eyes and puffiness.
Taecyeon: Beautiful green eyes!!! I love the fact that you look straight into the camera. You look very fresh and commercial here. I think you never looked great in your photo like this before. I'm a fan of this photo. Good job
David: Your best photo this Cycle. Your eyes really do stand out and this picture works very well with the product. I couldn't be happier with your selection this week.
Betty: Black and white sort of takes away from this image. The color and vibrance would really add a great dimension to this advertisement. The product, I'm unsure about it. Your eyes seem to be a bit exhausted. This product is to hide those puffy eyes.
Taecyeon: Beautiful eyes!!! Very natural for me. I think it was effortless. Your mouth a little bit stiff but still sexy. Very commercial for me but in my opinion, the color would be better, so we can see your beautiful eyes' color. But overall, I like the photo
David: The picture just feels so clean and commercial and your beautiful eyes definitely do stand out in this. I don't really see the tiredness in the eyes that Betty is talking about, so I think the product representation in this photo is strong. Good job again this week.
Betty: This does seem a little harsh for this particular theme, we would have really liked to see a softer eyes shot. A few other options here available. In terms of the product - Your eyes are flawless at showing the product use - That is reducing puffiness and dark circles - Which you don't seem to have here - That is really like.
Taecyeon: My eyes went straight to you hair first. I think it's too dominant in the photo. But your eyes definitely look great here. I think it would help better if you soften your look here. Your eyes were too 'fierce'. But overall, I really like your advertisment
David: My eyes also went to the hair first, which isn't a good thing when selling an eye product. Also, we can see one and a half of your eyes, which also doesn't bode well for this shoot. I appreciate that you took a chance with this photo, but I'm not sure if it'll pay off.
We're one step closer before we crowned our Second All Stars Winner.
Before that, let's see your photo for the L'oreal Men Expert product for this cycle.
Betty: Your eyes definitely stand out, but your mouth is covering half your face. Though the focus is on the eyes, the rest of the face is equally important. The product is supposed to lessen puffiness and remove dark circles - We can see some dark circles under your eyes, but they are not prominent - Nevertheless, they are there.
Taecyeon: Beautiful eyes!!! I love the fact that your eyes color pop out in the photo. I'm not sure the significant of the hand on your mouth but overall I like the way you stand out in the photo.
David: You have an advantage this shoot just by having the eyes you have because they normally stand out, anyway. They're definitely still the focal point of the shoot for me. I noticed them before I noticed your hand over your mouth. Not sure how I feel about that last part, though. Not sure how commercial that would be. Had your hand not been over your mouth and you were able to just slightly touch up the slight darkness under the eyes, this picture would have been flawless. As it stands, it's still a good picture.
Betty: Your eyes are beautiful and green, and they totally stand out here. You look fresh and young. It works almost perfectly as an advertisement for L'Oréal Men Expert, as well as the product. The product hides those dark rings under the eyes and puffiness.
Taecyeon: Beautiful green eyes!!! I love the fact that you look straight into the camera. You look very fresh and commercial here. I think you never looked great in your photo like this before. I'm a fan of this photo. Good job
David: Your best photo this Cycle. Your eyes really do stand out and this picture works very well with the product. I couldn't be happier with your selection this week.
Betty: Black and white sort of takes away from this image. The color and vibrance would really add a great dimension to this advertisement. The product, I'm unsure about it. Your eyes seem to be a bit exhausted. This product is to hide those puffy eyes.
Taecyeon: Beautiful eyes!!! Very natural for me. I think it was effortless. Your mouth a little bit stiff but still sexy. Very commercial for me but in my opinion, the color would be better, so we can see your beautiful eyes' color. But overall, I like the photo
David: The picture just feels so clean and commercial and your beautiful eyes definitely do stand out in this. I don't really see the tiredness in the eyes that Betty is talking about, so I think the product representation in this photo is strong. Good job again this week.
Betty: This does seem a little harsh for this particular theme, we would have really liked to see a softer eyes shot. A few other options here available. In terms of the product - Your eyes are flawless at showing the product use - That is reducing puffiness and dark circles - Which you don't seem to have here - That is really like.
Taecyeon: My eyes went straight to you hair first. I think it's too dominant in the photo. But your eyes definitely look great here. I think it would help better if you soften your look here. Your eyes were too 'fierce'. But overall, I really like your advertisment
David: My eyes also went to the hair first, which isn't a good thing when selling an eye product. Also, we can see one and a half of your eyes, which also doesn't bode well for this shoot. I appreciate that you took a chance with this photo, but I'm not sure if it'll pay off.
I seem to just slowly be slipping by because of scores. I actually thought I was getting first when i read critiques lol (bows head in shame) so when I saw i was in bottom two I cried a bit thinking I was going for sure 
You really surprised me this cycle.. good job!