Post by Taecyeon Ok on Mar 30, 2012 8:35:27 GMT -5
Hello Boys!!!
Welcome to your Tenth Judging Session. Only Two more shoot before we announced our Second All Stars Winner!!!
Let's see you photo this week.
Betty: *cries uncontrollably* Oh! Elijah! You were so young! It's so sad when a 90 year old like me out lives her secret lover! *sob sob sob* I don't like it! Noooo! Not one bit! *sob sob hic*.
I understand the theme to the photo, it's morbid, but in a way, it does work in a way of impact. Contrariwise, the disconnect from the camera makes it not work. The connect to the camera (I'm not sure how) would've made the image a bit more powerful.
((I know you have no control over that, but that's just how I think this particular image would look better. Just so you know, when we say stuff like this, it means we want you to take on what we've said, and look for things like that in your other photos.
))
Taecyeon: I love the styling. Very neat. I love your concept actually. Very unique and interesting. Your own funeral!!! My only problem is with your head. The proportion of your head wasn't really good. No matter what, I really like the risk that you gave us this week
Zach: Hm, i don't know how i feel about this photo. I like how it goes well with formal but then again the whole death thing kind of creeps me out. But it is very peaceful and i like that you went with a risk.
David: I love that you took a chance this week with this photo. Submitting a photo of yourself dead is a little creepy, but you're dressed in formalwear, so you meet the criteria of the theme and the mortician did a good job making you look good, so you have that working for you, too. Overall, this is a good photo and I'm happy you took the risk.
Betty: Well hello, you suave businessman you. I might have to ship you with another one of these sexy men here... Jensen/TaeYang. Hmmm Sounds good. I've been shipping Taeyang with Taeyang for a while now, it'll be a nice change.
As I said, you look suave, and sophisticated, not to mention wealthy and successful. The pout makes you look like you have somewhere to be, it's good. Not to mention that suit accentuates your delicious figure!
Taecyeon: I think you look very smart. I can see that you were modeling the suit which is good. Your styling was good. I think you can do better with your face. You look too serious in this photo. Overall, I still like the photo
Zach: I like the sophistication of this photo. But everything from your face down is great. Like Taecyeon said the face could be better but it's still a really good shoot. Also like said you look serious and most of the times when your in a suit it is serious so the face could actually work.
David: Dean Winchester never struck as the type to wear a suit and you look uncomfortable in it. I love the picture from the neck down as it looks like a very commercial take on formalwear. The face isn't that off-putting to me this round, so the uncomfortableness I commented on earlier is just a small complaint about this picture. Other than that, good job this week.
Betty: I don't know. It's kind of boring to me, and the quality is a little blurry. I'm a little apprehensive on your face, though it does look good, it just doesn't pop. It looks like the light is just falling off your face, as opposed to finding the angles.
Taecyeon: Hmm. I hate to agree with Betty but she's right. The photo look like you were just standing there. A little bit stiff for me. I like the suit. The combination with the black shirt is great. I still think you can do better than this, Matthew
Zach: To me this can be pulled off as semi formal but then again it could be formal. I like your face in this photo. Its very plain but what is there to do when your in a suit. You don't want to get it dirty.
David: The slight blurriness does detract from the photo a bit this round. It almost makes it look like a generic picture for an online dating site. Hands in the pockets don't really bother me as it tends to be fairly natural and accepted for a lot of guys nowadays. There doesn't seem to be much to draw attention in this picture, either. I do appreciate that it looks like you took the time to try to mask some text in the bottom righthand corner and I also appreciate that this look is different than what you've been giving us lately, so you're attempting diversity, but this photo falls a bit short of your potential in this competition.
Betty: Well, don't you look handsome. But I do have a bit of an issue with the positioning of your face. It's perhaps not the best angle for the light given. You still look handsome and the light does accentuate your cheek bones. I don't like how your hands are in your pockets. It kind of makes your hips child-bearing like mine.
Taecyeon: Definitely the best photo this week. I love your suit. Very smart. I love the vulnerability in this photo. I think you're selling the your clothes really well. Overall, good job, Ryan
Zach: I'm going to disagree with Taecyeon, if you werent looking down and you sort of look sad. It says that you dont want to wear these close, i feel like if this was an add i wouldnt want to buy these. But you do look great in the suit, just wish there was positive emotion in your face, but then again if you want to tell a story you could have had a long day at work and then it would work.
David: I really like this picture. If I had to nitpick something, while I'm fine with the positioning of your face, I wish you're eyes weren't squinting. The suit it very sharp and stylish. I like your pose as it helps keep this studio shot interesting.
Betty: Anyway, I do appreciate your lightness in this photo, it does show diversity and a change from you dark photo. It shows you're listening to your critique. You look light, fresh and relateable. And though one may think it washes you out, I think it definitely helps you stand out from the background and helps accentuate your features. You're also selling that watch nicely.
Taecyeon: Taeyang, you went with a different approach but I quite like your style. Street + Formal!!! You definitely stay truth to yourself in the picture. I wish the bowtie or maybe shirt was in different color so we can see the bowtie pop out a little bit. You look natural here but I'm not really a fan of your face this week. I think the angle of your face could be better
Zach: I really like the all white. I like how this is a summery version of formal and you arent in a suit sweating. I also am a huge fan of your facial expression it really works for this photo.
David: I would have preferred that GQ spread, but you're right, I probably would have commented on the random hand reaching in. I still like this picture, though. You look crisp and clean. Probably not the most formal we'll see, but it still meets the criteria well and you look good in it, too.
Welcome to your Tenth Judging Session. Only Two more shoot before we announced our Second All Stars Winner!!!
Let's see you photo this week.
Betty: *cries uncontrollably* Oh! Elijah! You were so young! It's so sad when a 90 year old like me out lives her secret lover! *sob sob sob* I don't like it! Noooo! Not one bit! *sob sob hic*.
I understand the theme to the photo, it's morbid, but in a way, it does work in a way of impact. Contrariwise, the disconnect from the camera makes it not work. The connect to the camera (I'm not sure how) would've made the image a bit more powerful.
((I know you have no control over that, but that's just how I think this particular image would look better. Just so you know, when we say stuff like this, it means we want you to take on what we've said, and look for things like that in your other photos.
)) Taecyeon: I love the styling. Very neat. I love your concept actually. Very unique and interesting. Your own funeral!!! My only problem is with your head. The proportion of your head wasn't really good. No matter what, I really like the risk that you gave us this week
Zach: Hm, i don't know how i feel about this photo. I like how it goes well with formal but then again the whole death thing kind of creeps me out. But it is very peaceful and i like that you went with a risk.
David: I love that you took a chance this week with this photo. Submitting a photo of yourself dead is a little creepy, but you're dressed in formalwear, so you meet the criteria of the theme and the mortician did a good job making you look good, so you have that working for you, too. Overall, this is a good photo and I'm happy you took the risk.
Betty: Well hello, you suave businessman you. I might have to ship you with another one of these sexy men here... Jensen/TaeYang. Hmmm Sounds good. I've been shipping Taeyang with Taeyang for a while now, it'll be a nice change.
As I said, you look suave, and sophisticated, not to mention wealthy and successful. The pout makes you look like you have somewhere to be, it's good. Not to mention that suit accentuates your delicious figure!
Taecyeon: I think you look very smart. I can see that you were modeling the suit which is good. Your styling was good. I think you can do better with your face. You look too serious in this photo. Overall, I still like the photo
Zach: I like the sophistication of this photo. But everything from your face down is great. Like Taecyeon said the face could be better but it's still a really good shoot. Also like said you look serious and most of the times when your in a suit it is serious so the face could actually work.
David: Dean Winchester never struck as the type to wear a suit and you look uncomfortable in it. I love the picture from the neck down as it looks like a very commercial take on formalwear. The face isn't that off-putting to me this round, so the uncomfortableness I commented on earlier is just a small complaint about this picture. Other than that, good job this week.
Betty: I don't know. It's kind of boring to me, and the quality is a little blurry. I'm a little apprehensive on your face, though it does look good, it just doesn't pop. It looks like the light is just falling off your face, as opposed to finding the angles.
Taecyeon: Hmm. I hate to agree with Betty but she's right. The photo look like you were just standing there. A little bit stiff for me. I like the suit. The combination with the black shirt is great. I still think you can do better than this, Matthew
Zach: To me this can be pulled off as semi formal but then again it could be formal. I like your face in this photo. Its very plain but what is there to do when your in a suit. You don't want to get it dirty.
David: The slight blurriness does detract from the photo a bit this round. It almost makes it look like a generic picture for an online dating site. Hands in the pockets don't really bother me as it tends to be fairly natural and accepted for a lot of guys nowadays. There doesn't seem to be much to draw attention in this picture, either. I do appreciate that it looks like you took the time to try to mask some text in the bottom righthand corner and I also appreciate that this look is different than what you've been giving us lately, so you're attempting diversity, but this photo falls a bit short of your potential in this competition.
Betty: Well, don't you look handsome. But I do have a bit of an issue with the positioning of your face. It's perhaps not the best angle for the light given. You still look handsome and the light does accentuate your cheek bones. I don't like how your hands are in your pockets. It kind of makes your hips child-bearing like mine.
Taecyeon: Definitely the best photo this week. I love your suit. Very smart. I love the vulnerability in this photo. I think you're selling the your clothes really well. Overall, good job, Ryan
Zach: I'm going to disagree with Taecyeon, if you werent looking down and you sort of look sad. It says that you dont want to wear these close, i feel like if this was an add i wouldnt want to buy these. But you do look great in the suit, just wish there was positive emotion in your face, but then again if you want to tell a story you could have had a long day at work and then it would work.
David: I really like this picture. If I had to nitpick something, while I'm fine with the positioning of your face, I wish you're eyes weren't squinting. The suit it very sharp and stylish. I like your pose as it helps keep this studio shot interesting.
Betty: Anyway, I do appreciate your lightness in this photo, it does show diversity and a change from you dark photo. It shows you're listening to your critique. You look light, fresh and relateable. And though one may think it washes you out, I think it definitely helps you stand out from the background and helps accentuate your features. You're also selling that watch nicely.
Taecyeon: Taeyang, you went with a different approach but I quite like your style. Street + Formal!!! You definitely stay truth to yourself in the picture. I wish the bowtie or maybe shirt was in different color so we can see the bowtie pop out a little bit. You look natural here but I'm not really a fan of your face this week. I think the angle of your face could be better
Zach: I really like the all white. I like how this is a summery version of formal and you arent in a suit sweating. I also am a huge fan of your facial expression it really works for this photo.
David: I would have preferred that GQ spread, but you're right, I probably would have commented on the random hand reaching in. I still like this picture, though. You look crisp and clean. Probably not the most formal we'll see, but it still meets the criteria well and you look good in it, too.
