Post by Taecyeon Ok on Mar 27, 2012 5:09:35 GMT -5
Hello Boys!!!
Welcome to your Ninth Judging Session. We have 3 more photoshoot, before we crown our Second All Stars Winner. Let's start the judging session for this week
Betty: You have done great by outshining your fellow model here. You look youthful and effervescent, and it's a sweet scene. But just looking at this, I don't know if I want to read this book. It seems a bit too tame for me, if you know what I mean. The point of a romance novel, it's supposed to be a bit rauchy.
Zach: I love how your the center of attention the one thing i dont like is that it loos like your almost strangling the girl. It's still cute and i can see the romance in this photo.
Taecyeon: I want more passion in your photo. But you and Liv do look great together. The chemistry is there but I think there's a lot of space for you to explore. Like the setting. Overall it just average for me this week
David: It's a good shot of you and you are definitely more of a focal point than the other model, so you at least have that going for you. Like the other judges, I do wish there was a bit more passion in this, but it still does read well for a romance novel, anyway.
Betty: As a romance novel, I don't really see what you are offering us. Unless the romance is with yourself. But still, I don't know if this is a book I'd read, but then I might read it if it has a good hook, or perhaps an extension to this photo. Alone, I don't think it's enough to be a romance novel cover.
Zach: I can totally see this on a cover of a romance novel. The only problem i have with this photo is that it's a little blurry and unfocused but if it was perfect i think it could be a great cover.
Taecyeon: Agree with Zach. I can see this as a Romance Cover. From the 'Lust' and your Hot body, this would could be a good cover but my problem is also with the quality. Very blurry and kinda 'cheap'
David: I can definitely see this as a romance novel cover. There are plenty of covers out there featuring only a half-naked man. The novels are targeted towards women, after-all. My only problem is the quality of the photo. You have a fantastic body in this shot, though
Betty: That connection you have with your female friend is great. But it comes at the cost of you looking not looking your best, and a disconnect to us, the potential readers. We need a bit of eye contact to catch our eyes and draw us in to buy the novel.
Zach: I really like this i can see the connection in both of your faces.
Taecyeon: The passion is there. The connection between both of you were strong. I don't think the angle for your face is great here. Overall, I can see the photo as a Romance Novel Cover
David: I'm not buying the passion between you two. You look like two teenagers awkwardly dancing for the first time at Prom. At least, that's what I get from your faces. The body language works well for the theme this week and the setting is a nice one for the romance novel, too. I just wish your faces were stronger.
Betty: The fact you've edited this into a cover does help. But at the same time, it does have a disconnect between us, the viewers. What we do have is chemistry. I can see myself reading this book.
Zach: Hm i really want to like this but for some reason i dont like it. It could be the wording at the top that steers me away and the fact that your face isnt looking at the girl but down at something on the ground. I just wish you had more emotion in your face.
Taecyeon: For me, this is by far my favorite photo. I love the chemistry between you and the girl. You gave effort. The setting is beautiful and romantic. Very interesting. Good job, Ryan!!!
David: I love the connection between you and your partner in this photo. It does make it look like it'll be a hot and steamy romance novel. I also appreciate the effort you put into making this appear as an actual novel cover by the addition of the text. Great job this week.
Betty: Unfortunately, Ricky, I don't think this works very well as a cover. It seems a bit too bleached for a cover. It does show your jawline, but it's really bleached out. I don't think this works very well.
Zach: I think this would go perfect on a novel about a greek god or something. Something catch that would turn a girl on to reading a book about a hot model or something. I like the coloring and everything.
Taecyeon: Sorry Ricky, this isn't your best photo. I like the hair since I saw lot of guy on the cover had a long hair, but my problem is actually with the pose, angle and quality of the photo. Love the hair but overall photo, not so much
David: I'm sorry Ricky, but I'm not a fan of this cover at all. The lighting really washes you out and the picture is a really low quality. The pose and the facial expression probably would have worked great this round if we could have seen them better through the light and quality. I'm sure your body is even looking fantastic in this photo, but it's hard to really get a good look at it
Betty: Good thing you got this reward. Your first photo is awful. It's really low quality, and a horrible screenshot. Your second photo, still a bad screenshot, and I don't know if it works completely for a romance novel. Perhaps a drama novel, or a soap opera, but not a romance novel. It's a heap better than your first photo. But if this is what you give us for "lighter" I suggest sticking with your dark photos.
I really would've liked to see a bit of ho-yay here. *google searches* ... OH SOUTH KOREA! WHY MUST YOU DEPRIVE ME OF MY HO-YAY?!
Zach: Im gonna agree with Betty. The first photo is awful in the soul reason for it being a screen cap but the second one is so cute. I love the fact that it's a wedding photo and still looking professional. I just don't like the angel we are shown
Taecyeon: *Look at your First Photo. *Tore up the photo. What were you thinking, Taeyang!!! The quality is bad. Totally look like a screencap. Good news, your second photo is better than the first one. And the bad news is it was just slightly better. The angle wasn't good. I think you can do way better than this.
David: Definitely going with your second photo. The quality is just too off on the first photo. In the second, I like that the photo helps set up the story itself. You can tell it'll be a romance novel by the wedding theme of the picture, but the body language sets up some questions. It adds some intrigue to the story.
Welcome to your Ninth Judging Session. We have 3 more photoshoot, before we crown our Second All Stars Winner. Let's start the judging session for this week
Betty: You have done great by outshining your fellow model here. You look youthful and effervescent, and it's a sweet scene. But just looking at this, I don't know if I want to read this book. It seems a bit too tame for me, if you know what I mean. The point of a romance novel, it's supposed to be a bit rauchy.
Zach: I love how your the center of attention the one thing i dont like is that it loos like your almost strangling the girl. It's still cute and i can see the romance in this photo.
Taecyeon: I want more passion in your photo. But you and Liv do look great together. The chemistry is there but I think there's a lot of space for you to explore. Like the setting. Overall it just average for me this week
David: It's a good shot of you and you are definitely more of a focal point than the other model, so you at least have that going for you. Like the other judges, I do wish there was a bit more passion in this, but it still does read well for a romance novel, anyway.
Betty: As a romance novel, I don't really see what you are offering us. Unless the romance is with yourself. But still, I don't know if this is a book I'd read, but then I might read it if it has a good hook, or perhaps an extension to this photo. Alone, I don't think it's enough to be a romance novel cover.
Zach: I can totally see this on a cover of a romance novel. The only problem i have with this photo is that it's a little blurry and unfocused but if it was perfect i think it could be a great cover.
Taecyeon: Agree with Zach. I can see this as a Romance Cover. From the 'Lust' and your Hot body, this would could be a good cover but my problem is also with the quality. Very blurry and kinda 'cheap'
David: I can definitely see this as a romance novel cover. There are plenty of covers out there featuring only a half-naked man. The novels are targeted towards women, after-all. My only problem is the quality of the photo. You have a fantastic body in this shot, though
Betty: That connection you have with your female friend is great. But it comes at the cost of you looking not looking your best, and a disconnect to us, the potential readers. We need a bit of eye contact to catch our eyes and draw us in to buy the novel.
Zach: I really like this i can see the connection in both of your faces.
Taecyeon: The passion is there. The connection between both of you were strong. I don't think the angle for your face is great here. Overall, I can see the photo as a Romance Novel Cover
David: I'm not buying the passion between you two. You look like two teenagers awkwardly dancing for the first time at Prom. At least, that's what I get from your faces. The body language works well for the theme this week and the setting is a nice one for the romance novel, too. I just wish your faces were stronger.
Betty: The fact you've edited this into a cover does help. But at the same time, it does have a disconnect between us, the viewers. What we do have is chemistry. I can see myself reading this book.
Zach: Hm i really want to like this but for some reason i dont like it. It could be the wording at the top that steers me away and the fact that your face isnt looking at the girl but down at something on the ground. I just wish you had more emotion in your face.
Taecyeon: For me, this is by far my favorite photo. I love the chemistry between you and the girl. You gave effort. The setting is beautiful and romantic. Very interesting. Good job, Ryan!!!
David: I love the connection between you and your partner in this photo. It does make it look like it'll be a hot and steamy romance novel. I also appreciate the effort you put into making this appear as an actual novel cover by the addition of the text. Great job this week.
Betty: Unfortunately, Ricky, I don't think this works very well as a cover. It seems a bit too bleached for a cover. It does show your jawline, but it's really bleached out. I don't think this works very well.
Zach: I think this would go perfect on a novel about a greek god or something. Something catch that would turn a girl on to reading a book about a hot model or something. I like the coloring and everything.
Taecyeon: Sorry Ricky, this isn't your best photo. I like the hair since I saw lot of guy on the cover had a long hair, but my problem is actually with the pose, angle and quality of the photo. Love the hair but overall photo, not so much
David: I'm sorry Ricky, but I'm not a fan of this cover at all. The lighting really washes you out and the picture is a really low quality. The pose and the facial expression probably would have worked great this round if we could have seen them better through the light and quality. I'm sure your body is even looking fantastic in this photo, but it's hard to really get a good look at it
Betty: Good thing you got this reward. Your first photo is awful. It's really low quality, and a horrible screenshot. Your second photo, still a bad screenshot, and I don't know if it works completely for a romance novel. Perhaps a drama novel, or a soap opera, but not a romance novel. It's a heap better than your first photo. But if this is what you give us for "lighter" I suggest sticking with your dark photos.
I really would've liked to see a bit of ho-yay here. *google searches* ... OH SOUTH KOREA! WHY MUST YOU DEPRIVE ME OF MY HO-YAY?!
Zach: Im gonna agree with Betty. The first photo is awful in the soul reason for it being a screen cap but the second one is so cute. I love the fact that it's a wedding photo and still looking professional. I just don't like the angel we are shown
Taecyeon: *Look at your First Photo. *Tore up the photo. What were you thinking, Taeyang!!! The quality is bad. Totally look like a screencap. Good news, your second photo is better than the first one. And the bad news is it was just slightly better. The angle wasn't good. I think you can do way better than this.
David: Definitely going with your second photo. The quality is just too off on the first photo. In the second, I like that the photo helps set up the story itself. You can tell it'll be a romance novel by the wedding theme of the picture, but the body language sets up some questions. It adds some intrigue to the story.
